‘Singing Breath’ is now 834 words lighter, largely thanks to tallaudrey‘s excellent critique (thank you!) I got all inspired working on it last night, and couldn’t stop until it was all tweaked. Then I was all wound up so I ended up reading until 2am. I feel a bit fuzzy-headed this morning, but I’ve just had another run-through of the story, and I think it’s much tighter now.

Now we are so happy, we do the dance of joy!

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